The Beloved

Cascades, the silken light
As it wreathes the lonely child.
With an esoteric melody ,it entwines.

An enigmatic beauty she hides
Behind those painful eyes. 

The warm light does passionately kiss
His lover's muslin skin.
Glides on her satin hair
Mingles with tears on the face
Melts into lacerated veins 
Of the forgotten child.

An enigmatic beauty she hides
Behind those painful eyes. 

Upon her, the lunar love drips.
Her sacred beauty, he worships
To which this colossus nature relinquishes
The gods themselves did sculpt the sublimity 
Of the beloved.
 -Angom Amy(15)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Beautiful ~
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April 12, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Amy ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
Britt Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Amy, I am taken aback by your lovely style of verse and your excellent choice of wording, rich with beautiful simili and metaphor. Excellent write. Christopher Thor Britt
Mehta Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 5:07 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , amy
Walker  Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 1:05 AM
Beautiful Amy... Verlena
Makama Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 5:04 PM
This is awesome and definitely a 7 for me! Keep up with the excellent work. You are highly welcome to Poetry soup, a community of mind blowing, soul piercing and intrigue creating poets! I hope to check back on you again. This is really, really so good
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Beautifully painted images...but the sadness in her eyes...!
Goswami Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Well written dear...Keep it up...Best wishes from Bengal...
Mahur Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Dear Amy, I liked your poem very much. Its Images and the feelings of love are sweet. I have just joined this site. So far I have on poemhunter.com with all my poems. Please visit my page and post your comments about my poems. Thanks!
Rhinem Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 10:04 AM
† I Love Your Beauty's Name, Sweet Beautiful Amy ˜ You Are So Tender We Can See, The Splendours You Shall Be ˜ Fascinating, Is Your Treasures Virgin Quill! My Love, Always, John
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