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The Beloved

Cascades, the silken light As it wreathes the lonely child. With an esoteric melody ,it entwines. An enigmatic beauty she hides Behind those painful eyes. The warm light does passionately kiss His lover's muslin skin. Glides on her satin hair Mingles with tears on the face Melts into lacerated veins Of the forgotten child. An enigmatic beauty she hides Behind those painful eyes. Upon her, the lunar love drips. Her sacred beauty, he worships To which this colossus nature relinquishes The gods themselves did sculpt the sublimity Of the beloved. -Angom Amy(15)

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Date: 1/21/2021 6:54:00 PM
Beautiful ~
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Date: 4/12/2014 9:20:00 PM
Amy ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
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Date: 4/10/2014 7:25:00 AM
Amy, I am taken aback by your lovely style of verse and your excellent choice of wording, rich with beautiful simili and metaphor. Excellent write. Christopher Thor Britt
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Date: 4/7/2014 5:07:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , amy
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Date: 3/30/2014 1:05:00 AM
Beautiful Amy... Verlena
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Date: 3/25/2014 5:04:00 PM
This is awesome and definitely a 7 for me! Keep up with the excellent work. You are highly welcome to Poetry soup, a community of mind blowing, soul piercing and intrigue creating poets! I hope to check back on you again. This is really, really so good
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:03:00 AM
Beautifully painted images...but the sadness in her eyes...!
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Date: 3/18/2014 12:28:00 PM
Well written dear...Keep it up...Best wishes from Bengal...
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Date: 3/16/2014 3:20:00 PM
Dear Amy, I liked your poem very much. Its Images and the feelings of love are sweet. I have just joined this site. So far I have on poemhunter.com with all my poems. Please visit my page and post your comments about my poems. Thanks!
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Date: 3/16/2014 10:04:00 AM
† I Love Your Beauty's Name, Sweet Beautiful Amy ˜ You Are So Tender We Can See, The Splendours You Shall Be ˜ Fascinating, Is Your Treasures Virgin Quill! My Love, Always, John
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