The Beginning of the Beginning

Prom.
Crepe paper streamers
Glitter and fuss
Fancy dresses
Ridiculous prices
Stylish Tuxes.
New colors, to impress
Limo?
What?
It's not a wedding, people!
It's a dance,
though few will.
Most will rush around,
stiff in their clothes.
Holding their stomachs in.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Ah, you have pierced prom's essence to the root--(to the rote, ala Canterbury Tales Prologue)--and with the prick of your pen shown how overdone it always is...Also, "It's a dance though few will" deserves to be immortalized somewhere. Bravo, Caren! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Thank you, thank you! I feel like throwing my hands up with joy over these comments.
Gauthier Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:26 AM
LOL - a delightful read, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Thank you, Line.
Williams Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Quite true and humorous Caren. You have captured the moment so well...Maria
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Thank you, Maria. I see you have been.
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