The Bee

Lavenders aroma calls The humble bumble, Honey awaits all.

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/7/2008 10:32:00 AM

'humble bumble, honey,' ...marvelous assonance! Lovely flow and word selections. BRAVO Ann! Best wishes, Keith

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 11/17/2008 5:32:00 AM

There's an innocence to this read that makes it as sweet as the honey itself. The flow is smooth and tone zperfect for the form and clarity. Michael

Date: 11/12/2008 4:17:00 PM

Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. The rhyme in the second line gives your poem a lighthearted feel. Keep on writing! Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/12/2008 3:14:00 PM

Good one..touch of humor..BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/12/2008 1:52:00 PM

Cute and sweet little Haiku! Nicely done! :) Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/12/2008 1:15:00 PM

This is a very sweetly written Haiku. Great job.

Not Anymore

Date: 11/12/2008 12:20:00 PM

I would take the s off of lavender but that's just me. Good!