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The Bee

Lavenders aroma calls The humble bumble, Honey awaits all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 12/7/2008 10:32:00 AM
'humble bumble, honey,' ...marvelous assonance! Lovely flow and word selections. BRAVO Ann! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/17/2008 5:32:00 AM
There's an innocence to this read that makes it as sweet as the honey itself. The flow is smooth and tone zperfect for the form and clarity. Michael
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. The rhyme in the second line gives your poem a lighthearted feel. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/12/2008 3:14:00 PM
Good one..touch of humor..BG
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Date: 11/12/2008 1:52:00 PM
Cute and sweet little Haiku! Nicely done! :) Carrie
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Date: 11/12/2008 1:15:00 PM
This is a very sweetly written Haiku. Great job.
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Date: 11/12/2008 12:20:00 PM
I would take the s off of lavender but that's just me. Good!
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