The Bee

Lavenders aroma calls
The humble bumble,
Honey awaits all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Treacher Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 12:17 AM
I felt I was there - a beautiful hum to these words and the lavender makes me feel gently sleepy.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 10:32 AM
'humble bumble, honey,' ...marvelous assonance! Lovely flow and word selections. BRAVO Ann! Best wishes, Keith
Degenhardt Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 5:32 AM
There's an innocence to this read that makes it as sweet as the honey itself. The flow is smooth and tone zperfect for the form and clarity. Michael
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November 12, 2008 at 4:17 PM
Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. The rhyme in the second line gives your poem a lighthearted feel. Keep on writing! Karen
Gorelick Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 3:14 PM
Good one..touch of humor..BG
Richards Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 1:52 PM
Cute and sweet little Haiku! Nicely done! :) Carrie
Higgins Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 1:15 PM
This is a very sweetly written Haiku. Great job.
Anymore Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 12:20 PM
I would take the s off of lavender but that's just me. Good!
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