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The Beauty of Time:A Poem of Many Haikus

The concept of time Intriguing in all our lives Especially mine Is time an object? Is it something to fool with? Can we transform it? Perhaps we cannot... Can we manage it? Indeed... Where does time take us? Into a new world...? A world where photos are old? Even where WE'RE old... When my time is up I shall wait... Just wait. That's it What happens after?

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/29/2014 9:20:00 AM

Welcome to the soup and congratulation on your placement.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/29/2014 6:41:00 AM

Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, Richard

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/29/2014 12:38:00 AM

Well constructed poem Richard! The concept of time is confounding at best. I like the line 'a world where photos are old' - normally we see photos as instruments to capture time - never aging. Well written poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2014 11:12:00 AM

oh, My Richard this is awesome.. love the series.. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 1/24/2014 4:12:00 PM

Richard, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2014 12:13:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Richard - I choose your first haiku poem - well done - hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 1/24/2014 11:38:00 AM

this is perfect, Rick!!! .. i love your ideas..the realities you revealed about TIME.. :)) nice piece my friend!! ^__^