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The Beauty of Peace


Sitting on the beach
On a grainy bed of sand,
The warm breeze whispers.
*
The warm breeze whispers
In a soft current of air,
Off the blue water.
*
Off the blue water
Nature’s reflections reflect,
The beauty of peace.

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Tyler Martin

April 27, 2009 at 10:41 PM

Compelling work again, nice one.

Abe Lopez

April 18, 2009 at 12:22 PM

Captivating title and nice choka.

Tyler Davis

April 17, 2009 at 11:56 PM

A relaxing place to visit.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 9, 2009 at 7:06 PM

Very nice choka. It makes me want to try some. It has such a refreshing flow. Congratulations on being featured this week.

John Weber

April 9, 2009 at 1:50 PM

Now you've got me fascinated with the Choka form; you're so crafty within the format, Raul! I enjoy the possessive on Nature, as we all tend to relate to those humanistic qualities in the world around us. Warm regards, John.

Michael Jordan

April 8, 2009 at 8:07 PM

Wow Raul I just loved this poem and think I'll add it to my Favorites - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

Leon Wilson

April 7, 2009 at 5:24 AM

Congratulations Raul on your featured poem this week. God Bless. Leon

Tyesha Ehigiator

April 6, 2009 at 5:24 PM

Very peaceful and calming piece...I love to sit back and just watch the waves rush in and the sunset...Such an incredible feeling of content there it just warms the soul...I have never seen this form before, you are good at it..I see that you are dabbling in a little of this and that...Nice work...Congrats on the Awesome feature..GB Always, Tyesha

Lena Townsend

April 6, 2009 at 1:59 PM

Wow.... I like the serenity of this one!!! Great write. Nice imagery! I just love your work! Congratulations on having it featured this week! Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

April 6, 2009 at 1:32 PM

Didn't realize this was featured. Congrats Raul. Well deserved. Love, Shar

April 6, 2009 at 11:58 AM

I can feel the peace in this poem. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Diane Christian

April 6, 2009 at 11:35 AM

so beautiful written, sounds so peaceful, and you are featured well done, God bless from diane

Sharon Winter

April 6, 2009 at 9:03 AM

Reading this is like meditation. Beautiful, soothing and deeply peaceful. Sigh. Lovely writing Raul. Love, Shar

Trudy Diane Rider

April 6, 2009 at 8:43 AM

This is beautiful, so peaceful. Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy

Brian Strand

April 6, 2009 at 8:23 AM

Congrats on your feature this week Raul.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 6, 2009 at 6:13 AM

Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Frank F. Atanacio

April 6, 2009 at 6:11 AM

congrats on this being featured!!!

Ernilando Tugaff

April 6, 2009 at 4:02 AM

Hello friend Raul, thank you for sharing us this wonderful Choka and congratulations on your featured poem.Ernilando

Leon Wilson

April 6, 2009 at 1:04 AM

A nice relaxing poem. I'm learning all the time here on this site thankyou to everyyone. I might have a go on a Choka. Thank you Raul. God Bless. Leon