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The Beauty of Peace

Sitting on the beach On a grainy bed of sand, The warm breeze whispers. * The warm breeze whispers In a soft current of air, Off the blue water. * Off the blue water Nature’s reflections reflect, The beauty of peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 10:41:00 PM
Compelling work again, nice one.
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:22:00 PM
Captivating title and nice choka.
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:56:00 PM
A relaxing place to visit.
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:06:00 PM
Very nice choka. It makes me want to try some. It has such a refreshing flow. Congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:50:00 PM
Now you've got me fascinated with the Choka form; you're so crafty within the format, Raul! I enjoy the possessive on Nature, as we all tend to relate to those humanistic qualities in the world around us. Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:07:00 PM
Wow Raul I just loved this poem and think I'll add it to my Favorites - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations Raul on your featured poem this week. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:24:00 PM
Very peaceful and calming piece...I love to sit back and just watch the waves rush in and the sunset...Such an incredible feeling of content there it just warms the soul...I have never seen this form before, you are good at it..I see that you are dabbling in a little of this and that...Nice work...Congrats on the Awesome feature..GB Always, Tyesha
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:59:00 PM
Wow.... I like the serenity of this one!!! Great write. Nice imagery! I just love your work! Congratulations on having it featured this week! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:32:00 PM
Didn't realize this was featured. Congrats Raul. Well deserved. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 11:58:00 AM
I can feel the peace in this poem. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/6/2009 11:35:00 AM
so beautiful written, sounds so peaceful, and you are featured well done, God bless from diane
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:03:00 AM
Reading this is like meditation. Beautiful, soothing and deeply peaceful. Sigh. Lovely writing Raul. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:43:00 AM
This is beautiful, so peaceful. Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Raul.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:11:00 AM
congrats on this being featured!!!
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:02:00 AM
Hello friend Raul, thank you for sharing us this wonderful Choka and congratulations on your featured poem.Ernilando
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:04:00 AM
A nice relaxing poem. I'm learning all the time here on this site thankyou to everyyone. I might have a go on a Choka. Thank you Raul. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:57:00 AM
Such beauty Raul,one for my favourites .Rgds brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/5/2009 6:23:00 PM
Fascinating...More choka to spice up poetry's spirit. All the best.
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:23:00 PM
This is exactly how I feel at the beach, Raul. Indeed, "Nature's reflections reflect the beauty of peace." Very serene and comforting poem!
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:20:00 PM
Incredible, you seem to master every style. I like the way the sequence flows and the repitition of lines describing a beautiful place.
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