Valsa George Poet Cinquain

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Feb- 9-2026

Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest

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The Beauty of our Loved Ones

What life 
without loved ones?
They bring warmth to our life.
Without them life is so barren
Hold them.

Father
Epicenter-
around whom we circle.
In his gravitational pull,
Safety.

Mother
Epitome-
of sweet love and concern.
angel, friend, guide and guardian
Heartbeat. 

Siblings
beans of same pod
of same blood with same traits
co- partakers of joy and pain
Blessing

Buddies-
add spice to life
to whom we can confide
grim secrets that can't be divulged.
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Paula Goldsmith May 11, 2026 at 11:48 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. A loving family is amazing. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............

sara Etgen-Baker February 11, 2026 at 3:24 PM perfect cinquains and a beautiful message within each.

John Loving Iii February 11, 2026 at 12:57 PM Bosses, Politicians Teachers and police. YADAYADAYADA... Ask your kid what five six means.

Paige Hind February 10, 2026 at 3:09 PM lovely cinquains!!! good luck <3

Jay Narain February 9, 2026 at 10:37 AM A reality of life, family, and friends. I loved it.

Sara Kendrick February 9, 2026 at 7:59 AM Good one describing how our families if of a sound nature are a shield and trainer for life. I enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Yann Rolland February 9, 2026 at 6:32 AM family and friends, what else ? may be some coffee, just smiling, thanks for the wonderful poem, a pleasure and deep truth, merci

Tom Cunningham February 9, 2026 at 4:31 AM Family are everything , more precious than gold and the heads of the family keep it all together. Well written Valsa, about the most important things in life. Tom