The Beauty of Mountaintop Lake

The Prussian clear blue water exaggerates my observation, the reverie lingers with an ebb flow of nature’s sounds- I feel at ease when gazing at this beautiful God-given creation of the majestic Mountaintop Lake, its elegance resounds. The colorful fish wearing pink, yellow and purple hues, at the shore, the pebbles surface the tide like romance- Sitting on top of our cabana I get a marvelous treetop view, my heart sings, as my soul is lifted in dulcet dance. The top of the mount is blanketed in melting snow, the altitude is so high it always leaves a slight chill- As I watch the children playing hide-and-seek below, I inhale the spring breeze and my heart lays still. Mother Nature holds such grace when I glare in awe, she reveals her desire to bring harmony and peace- When I remember all the years here there’s not one flaw, And as I grow older my passion for this lake does increase. May 28, 2017
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Warrior Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 6:55 PM
Congrats!!! Laura...on your win my friend...a beautiful write...god bless...^WW^
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on this splendid piece being celebrated in second place! : )
Michaels Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 2:40 AM
Delightful imagery you've conjured up here, Laura. I especially like the "inhale the spring breeze" line! Congratulations on your high-placed win! Regards, John.
Roper Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 7:38 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win ~*
Daniel Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Beautiful, Luloo:) congratulations:)
Gupta Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 11:54 PM
Resplendent ... I agree with WW ... The third stanza I like the most ...
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Oh my, this is really good, Laura! I think it's the best I've read so far! Best of luck to you
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