The Beauty of Goodbye

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in bright formation gay hued birds take capri skies farewell to the north pink dawn mistiness and night nowhere to be found so long silken dark the storm has vanished in its place rainbow colors good riddance tempest at the end of day at last one beautiful death hues of sweet sorrow

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/4/2021 3:41:00 AM

Some really beautiful imagery there... A great write

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/4/2021 11:26:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paghunda.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2021 12:35:00 PM

Gay-hued birds and rainbow colors. We have flooding over here! I loved the rainbows when I lived in Hawaii! They were the best. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/3/2021 3:57:00 PM

I'll bet you enjoyed many scenic delights in beautiful Hawaii, including gorgeous rainbows. Hope those flood waters recede soon. :D

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/3/2021 7:29:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Evelyn ~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/3/2021 11:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Line.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/3/2021 1:27:00 AM

Going south you should get wonderful weather. I said should, because we are in May, the air is still a bit cold and it is all grey ugly clouds. Where is my beautiful May?

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/3/2021 11:19:00 AM

It is grey here where I am, too. I guess we'll find beautiful May on another sunny day. :D

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/2/2021 8:16:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, Though your poem is conceptually interesting, I tend to enjoy it more when they are about death; death when its opposite is suffering, and what comes on the heels of that; nothing but storms, in the end, have a great night and best regards

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/2/2021 10:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and observations, Lasaad. :) Blessings, Evelyn