The Beauty In Decay

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Dead leaves dance in the wind and embrace As it takes them to a recent place Their beauty is in decay, yet still alive A reminder that all things must thrive. The last flower of the season stands alone Withered and fading, its beauty is now gone But its vibrant colors remain in my memory A symbol of life's fleeting energy. The trees shed their leaves, one by one As they prepare for a season undone But their naked branches reach up high A testament to the strength that never dies. The world around us may acerbate and evolve But life's cycle continues to revolve From birth to growth to death and decay A constant reminder to live each day. So let the wind carry you wherever it may Embrace the beauty in every decay Even in death, there is still life A reminder to cherish every moment and every strife.

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Jay Narain

Date: 6/9/2023 4:42:00 PM

A masterpiece poem. Detailed description of fading beauty of flowers and their never ending beauty. Love the picture. You are always a winner,

Bill Baker

Date: 6/9/2023 3:11:00 PM

A dynamic presentation of life itself and its phases, my friend. The photo above enhances the experience of reading your fine poetry. A FAV for me, thanks for sharing your wisdom and poetic gift. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2023 2:52:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one today. Yes, things never stay the same, life has it spring, summer, fall and winter which is all natural. Your work has good rhythm, flow and rhyme plus a nice topic upon which to write. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2023 11:59:00 AM

- You say the answer in the last line, Las - ... live each day - Beautifully written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 6/9/2023 11:14:00 AM

This is incredible Sotto, sad, yet hopeful. Life is too precious and fleeting for us to fully comprehend. Your poem beautifully articulates through your poet's heart such deepness and truth. I love this poem, I am putting it in my favorites. I hope you are blessed and doing well my friend, and that you have a wonderful upcoming weekend :)