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The Beauty I See

THE BEAUTY I SEE THE BEAUTY, I SEE IS LIKE THE SEA. AS I INDULGE WITH COMPLIANCE, YOUR NO LONGER, PART OF MY ALLIANCE. WHEN THE STARS CRY, WITH TEARS IN THEIR EYES. I HAVE TO LET GO, YOU NEED TIME TO GROW, LIKE FINE WINE, OR ANOTHER LIFE TIME. THE BEAUTY I SEE, IN YOU STILL SHINES. THE SUN IS OURS, WITH CONFIDENCE AN POWERS, I WAKE, TO MEET YOU , AT YOUR REQUEST. SO LOVELY, AN HONORED TO BE YOUR GUEST. LETTING ME KNOW, I HAVE ANOTHER SHOW. TO COMPLETE AN ATTEND, AN, THIS IS NOT THE END. by: Shi Ricks @ copy.

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Date: 6/8/2014 9:03:00 PM
Excellent write - congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/18/2014 7:58:00 PM
Shi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:33:00 AM
Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, shi
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:26:00 PM
Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Shi !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2014 7:11:00 AM
ok I got it thanks you so much.
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Date: 2/9/2014 6:56:00 AM
How do I tell if I won I dont see it. New to this please help.
Date: 2/5/2014 11:25:00 AM
Shi, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/5/2014 8:53:00 AM
Keep posting more poems..enjoyed the read!!
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Date: 2/5/2014 4:27:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Shi- I choose your first "beauty" written poem - hope you will write many sweet poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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