Shi Ricks Poet ABC

The Beauty I See

THE BEAUTY I SEE
THE BEAUTY, I SEE
IS LIKE THE SEA.
AS I INDULGE WITH COMPLIANCE,
YOUR NO LONGER, PART OF MY ALLIANCE.
WHEN THE STARS CRY,
WITH TEARS IN THEIR EYES.
I HAVE TO LET GO,
YOU NEED TIME TO GROW,
LIKE FINE WINE,
OR ANOTHER LIFE TIME.
THE BEAUTY I SEE, IN YOU
STILL SHINES.
THE SUN IS OURS,
WITH CONFIDENCE AN POWERS,
I WAKE, TO MEET YOU , AT YOUR REQUEST.
SO LOVELY, AN HONORED TO BE YOUR GUEST.
LETTING ME KNOW,
I HAVE ANOTHER SHOW.
TO COMPLETE AN ATTEND,
AN, THIS IS NOT THE END.
by: Shi Ricks
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Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2014 at 9:03 PM Excellent write - congratulations on your win!

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2014 at 7:58 PM Shi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Dr.Ram Mehta February 9, 2014 at 7:33 AM Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, shi

Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2014 at 7:26 PM Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Shi !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Shi Ricks February 9, 2014 at 7:11 AM ok I got it thanks you so much. Shi Ricks February 9, 2014 at 6:56 AM How do I tell if I won I dont see it. New to this please help.

Skat A February 5, 2014 at 11:25 AM Shi, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Pace Ink-U-Script February 5, 2014 at 8:53 AM Keep posting more poems..enjoyed the read!!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2014 at 4:27 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Shi- I choose your first "beauty" written poem - hope you will write many sweet poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)