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The Beauty God Made In You

He made you to be honored and to function. Not to make a poem into some X-rated laughing function. Whatever you write, you think God does not see? Believers,poets, that goes on our moral records permanently. Our bodies are most beautiful. The pleasures we have in them most bountiful. Comedy is not that easy to write. I get sad when a body is nothing but a joke, and trite. There is no need to make world leaders wrong, When obscenity, becomes our international song. God knows all we write, stays on record forever. Do we love God, or do want friends to think us, way beyond clever? 1-18-2022

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Date: 1/18/2022 12:36:00 PM
Masterful verse, Pangie! Don't let anyone discourage you from expressing your feelings - I guess that is what poetry is all about - Bob H
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/19/2022 8:39:00 AM
Hello Bob, I get plenty of negative))) so did Shakespeare, Joyce, Cummings.....even the writings of God Himself.....are considered junk. Am really not well. Yesterday, thought I would die. Pain excruciating! I miss being here,Bob. Three people here writte me. All angels..))) Thank you. Panagiota
Date: 1/18/2022 11:56:00 AM
Interesting writing. My interest piqued. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/19/2022 8:42:00 AM
I understand, Regina, why your interest was piqued. Hope I get back on line soon. Hugs, Panagiota
Date: 1/18/2022 6:14:00 AM
Lot's of Good advice! Honest soul-felt sentiment. "Comedy is not that easy to write. I get sad when a body is nothing but a joke, and trite." For sure, our bodies are the manifestation of God's Spirit of love in physical creation -- to dishonor, to disgrace even one, is to disrespect the entire universe. Blessings, Pangie -- hope your healing is progressing. Joe.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/18/2022 10:30:00 AM
Hey, Joe! FEEL WE ARE PART OF A DYING BREED! Who THINKS LIKE THIS? THIS POETRY IS NOT WANTED HERE. BUT, THEN, DONT READ ME. LOL. EVEN CHRISTIANS HERE, ASK ME.TO NOT WRITE LIKE THIS. SORRY, BUT THIS IS ME. ON MY SITE, I CAN PUBLISH WHAT I LIKE. THERE IS NO HOMEWORK HERE TO BE LOVED. BUT EACH POET SHOWS THEIR HEART. SOME LIKE US. SOME LOATHE US. ONLY THE CREATOR’s OPINION MATTERS.AND FRIENDS WITH GOLD HEARTS LIKE YOURS. I JUST KNOW WE ARE RESPONSIBLE TO GOD FOR ALL WE WRITE. I HAVE NO DESIRE TO BURN IN HELL FOR ETERNITY BY USING MY WORDS FOR LOW PURPOSES,! HAVE PT TODAY. X-RAYS THURSDAY IN SACRAMEMNTO. YOU MADE SOME POWERFUL COMMENTS. WISH WE ALL CARED ABOUT OUR SOULS WITH THE RABID DOG MADNESS WE CARED ABOUT COVID. BUT THE SOUL NO LONGER MATTERS, PRINCE.A TRAGEDY. THANK YOU. PANAGIOTA

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