The Beating Heart

I remember reading in school
Of the “Tell tale heart”
I read with a lump in my throat
Hardly breathing
A story that was so cruel
The intensity of which it beat
To inform others of the wrong 
That was done

The beating so loud
To the one that had wounded it
Makes me wonder
Does it happen now
When someone breaks your heart
Can they hear the pain
Or does your heart cry out in vain

People so calloused and so cruel
Have they broken so many
They forget all the rules
To protect something so strong
And yet so fragile
Takes a person with devotion
A person with character

So this is to all 
Take warning 
Take heed
Don’t give something so precious
For someone to bleed
Your heart just can’t sit alone on a shelf
For to love the right one 
Brings abundant wealth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Amato Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 3:36 PM
In high school hearing Poe's Tell Tale Heart out loud was intense... but I never thought about my own heart or love... Your poem is wonderful. I'm so glad you wrote this and I found it. I like the ending stanza...beautiful images. I'll take the warning and heed to "heart." PS: thank you for your kind comment on my poem.
Gass Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 7:28 AM
Laurie, this is an awesome write. I love how you opened this. Wonderful imagery with that. It flows into a beautiful message of how we should treat each other. Great work, Lauriedo, Love Robin
Duel Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 4:03 AM
Wow........ Very nice, thank you for your honesty in your writing. refreshing
Foulk Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 12:28 PM
with all of the broken hearts that I had while growing up it is a wonder that i still have a heart. but most of us recover and move on to new loves. this was a beautiful and so tender piece of lovely poetry.
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