The Beast of Hidden Moon

A hidden moon sails above the darkened cloud
Confidant, arrogant and so hauntingly proud.
A stirring mass crawl’s the darkly naked trees.
A chilled malevolence creeps amongst the breeze.
A cracking twig races the heart, suddenly skips a beat,
You spin around wondering of the horrors yet to meet.
You scan the woods for signs; you train your searching ear,
All the time your heart races, thumps, increasing latent fear.
A distant howl vibrates, stirs the gathering mist,
Nocturnal sounds grate the nerves, hard to resist.
It grows louder, the clawing bushes rustle and shake,
You step away from the trees a decision to make.
Flee or stand, face the terrible entity of fear,
The noise increasing, what horror will soon appear?
You taste the bitter bile as your hands wildly tremble,
The shape grows into something your thoughts resemble 
A terrible cry escapes your lips and fills the darkened night,
As neighbours pour out of doors to check the haunting sight.
A beast bounds from the woods and knocks you to the ground,
Only then do you realise, it’s your loyal and loving hound.


S.de Burca.......© 6th May 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:21 AM
Belated congratulation my friend on your win. It's really nice penned in extra ordinary way. Loved always, bl
De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Thank you kind sir for reading and good wishes.
A  Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 2:09 PM
congrats in Roy's contest............. SKAT
De Burca Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Hi thank you for the good wishes.
Delaney Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Excellent story with a fun ending Thanks for stopping by my page. You brightened my day a lot.
De Burca Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 3:55 PM
I enjoyed reading your poems. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
De Burca Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 4:00 PM
Hi and thank you for taking the time to comment and read.
Hamilton Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 6:15 PM
what a poem it has everything suspense mystery and fear illogical fear I was enthralled by it lovely pen
De Burca Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Sorry about the misplaced reply below. I don't know what happened there to cause it to appear under your original comment.
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May 25, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Thanks Linda for taking the time to read and comment.
Jones Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 8:52 PM
Ohhhhh on pins and needles then a belly laugh...thanks.....I needed that before I went to sleep....and thank you for your very nice comments...
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May 21, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
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May 20, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Hi, thanks again for reading and commenting on another of my poems. I appreciate it. :)
Eastman Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 10:42 AM
Tremendous story poem! Loved it! Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on peoples names and leave comments... It gives them an easy way to find your poems, by then clicking on your name... It's always good to start with the 'soup social' 'who is online'. Good hunting.
De Burca Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 2:11 PM
Hi, glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave a comment. Its greatly appreciated.
Jad Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 3:59 PM
It is an enchanting myth... I was totally gripped by the lines... You have woven it in a truly clever way!! Excellent!
De Burca Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 2:09 PM
Hi and thank you for reading my poem and leaving a nice comment.
Horstkotter Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 3:26 PM
Well written. Very much enjoyed this poem. Well done.
De Burca Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Hi and thank you for reading my poem and taking the time to comment.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Thank God for the end of the story. So captivating, I was taken in! Beautiful and vibrant! Thank you!
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May 13, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.
Joyce Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 9:14 AM
wow..an amzing poem ...very good story here
De Burca Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 4:19 PM
Thanks Jim for reading and leaving a nice comment.
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