The Beast

The beast is hungry,
The beast is free,
The beast is hunting,
You or me,

The beast is anger,
The beast is hate,
Injects your heart,
Damage your faith,

The beast is black,
The beast is white,
An encounter with the beast,
Not a pretty sight,

The beast attacks the weak,
It attacks your soul,
No longer warm,
Your heart grows cold,

God is the answer,
God is the cure,
God in your soul,
The beast no more....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/30/2012 7:25:00 AM
Excellent I believe the same in that sences
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/30/2012 7:26:00 AM
thanks Edmond
Date: 7/30/2012 11:29:00 AM
Wow...loving this all the way!!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/30/2012 2:04:00 PM
thanks PG
Date: 7/29/2012 3:55:00 PM
Nice!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/30/2012 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Tone
Date: 7/28/2012 4:40:00 PM
Once again Richard fab write!! well done :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/30/2012 10:46:00 AM
thanks Kerry
Date: 7/26/2012 9:44:00 PM
Awesome,,,, flow in your words ;}
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/28/2012 7:54:00 AM
thanks much Debbie
Date: 7/26/2012 9:17:00 PM
Your final verse speaks volumes, my friend! Marvelous flow and on/off rhyming, and exceptional imagery! Well done, Richard!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/28/2012 7:54:00 AM
thanks Keith
Date: 7/26/2012 12:59:00 PM
Wonderful poem. It is true that only those that have God in their life can be free completely from the beast and its marks(endtimemark). Wonderful! your works are perfect and encouraging to the lost souls. Thanks for this message. Gud evening to you.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/28/2012 7:53:00 AM
true true,thanks Alfred
Date: 7/25/2012 3:59:00 PM
Message resounds.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/25/2012 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Sherese
Date: 7/25/2012 1:57:00 PM
Life is a rapacious beast that wonders not what you believe in,and is only curious as to how you are going to repay It for what you have so eagerly received - Deity is Just - thanks for addressing God Palmer -with respect and Godspeed to you - J.A.B.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/25/2012 4:24:00 PM
Thanks J.A.B,BLESS
Date: 7/25/2012 11:51:00 AM
simple and yet so powerful, your work intrigues me
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/25/2012 4:23:00 PM
thanks much T.S
Date: 7/24/2012 2:40:00 AM
great work mate ....faith in the Lord is the way of light...great poetry and great insight ..
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/24/2012 6:04:00 AM
thanks mate,glad you enjoyed
Date: 7/23/2012 6:56:00 PM
walk with mi and yuh father, yuh protector, he and i wile be, fur our faith will only grow warm, not cold. as we restore di good of all evil together with god. R N' C nuff luv Richie!!! xoxo
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 7:23:00 PM
always my angel,thanks Carma
Date: 7/23/2012 6:44:00 PM
An amazing write. I am glad you have identified as anger and hate. There is one more beast and perhaps the ugliest and that is 'lust'. Thanks for commenting on my poem The Town of Sintra. I am glad my poem has inspired you to add Sintra as one of the places to visit. Beleive me you will not regret it. I live very near Sintra. One of the palaces I have described is visible from the street on which I live. Let me know when you come and I'll host you a Dinner in one of the Sintra Restaurants.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 7:22:00 PM
gonna take a washout if the food is as good as the view gotta get enough of each,lol,thanks Mohammad
Date: 7/23/2012 6:39:00 PM
Nice poem love it
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 7:20:00 PM
thanks Carmen,happy you did
Date: 7/23/2012 2:29:00 PM
Great work about your faith..Great testimony..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 2:59:00 PM
thank you very much Sara
Date: 7/23/2012 9:26:00 AM
A daily stgruggle with the beast. Greta poem to share with us.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 2:59:00 PM
thanks much Joann
Date: 7/23/2012 8:04:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words on my poems, but without the Lords wisdom and the Holy Spirit I could never accomplish anything, your poem here is great and reminds everyone that the beast is alive and active, God grant you the wisdom to do His work through the soup, Godbless bob
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 2:58:00 PM
God bless you too Robert
Date: 7/22/2012 10:16:00 PM
Evil is always an unwelcomed beast in this world. You have written about everyone's adversary very well here.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 2:57:00 PM
thanks Robert
Date: 7/22/2012 7:35:00 PM
It's a very striking poem Richard. Your analysis is so true. The beast or the evil always dwell in each one of us but when our faith in God is strong, the evil or the beastly instincts do not get a chance to dominate and the moment we are weak in our faith it began to influence us badly. Beautiful write. Love and best wishes..Ravindra
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 2:57:00 PM
thanks much Ravindra
Date: 7/22/2012 7:07:00 PM
Jesus is the answer for the world today ; above Him there is no other, Jesus is the way.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 2:56:00 PM
amen Situation
Date: 7/22/2012 5:23:00 PM
nice poem Richard...Joseph
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 2:56:00 PM
thanks Joseph
Date: 7/22/2012 12:15:00 PM
Good one Richard ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 8:14:00 AM
thanks Anne,nuff oxoxox
Date: 7/22/2012 11:48:00 AM
nice write..... God really takes away the beast from every one
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 8:13:00 AM
HE does,thanks Frederick
Date: 7/22/2012 10:20:00 AM
This is so true, Richard. I enjoyed reading your poem, today. Love, Kim
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 8:13:00 AM
thanks Kim,oxox Richie
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