The Bear Yawns

the bear yawns

	winter hulk blocks exit....

		as cub plays

		~//~

©27 Oct 2010  Charles Henderson
   10 th in Andreas’ Haiku contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 11:00 PM
lovely haiku , congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest >> James
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October 8, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Congrats Charles on your win in Andrea's contest with this super entry luv... very vivid lines of expression to impress the reader .. enjoy a sweet victory and happy weekend my friend with luv..
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October 8, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Definitely one of my favorites in this contest, Charles! Congratulations on your win. Also, thanks for the help on the way to NJ. It was really nice chatting with you and Carolyn. I made it here to my sister's house just a short time ago. Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Charles congrats on your win in Andrea's contest
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 8:06 AM
"Congratulations" on an excellent entry Charles!! Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on this well mdeserved win in the contest, Charles
Culverhouse Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:31 AM
very nice!! congrats on the placement!
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October 8, 2010 at 4:13 AM
Charles,I am yawning right now because it is 5 a.m!! Congrats with your winning haiku. LUv, Andrea
Stella Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 8:02 AM
I too did bears lol loved yours though gl my friend in Linda's contest looks like a winner to me keep up the wonderful work also so sry your other poem got outcasted by soup cause that was defintly a winner keep on rocking this town charles
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September 28, 2010 at 4:28 PM
enjoyed your poem...do you remember when they were building the super highway they have now?(in Atlanta) the construction slow downs were terrible and there were less lanes too and usually one of those was blocked for construction. yuck!
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September 28, 2010 at 8:57 AM
What a delightful and creative entry for Andrea's contest, Charles. Indeed, you have approached this assignment with imaginative inspiration. Best wishes in Andrea's haiku contest. Love, Carolyn
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