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The Bear Yawns

the bear yawns winter hulk blocks exit.... as cub plays ~//~ ©27 Oct 2010 Charles Henderson 10 th in Andreas’ Haiku contest

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Francine Roberts

Date: 10/9/2010 11:00:00 PM

lovely haiku , congrats on your win in the contest

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2010 7:33:00 AM

Congratulations Charles on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/8/2010 1:35:00 PM

Congrats Charles on your win in Andrea's contest with this super entry luv... very vivid lines of expression to impress the reader .. enjoy a sweet victory and happy weekend my friend with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2010 1:23:00 PM

Definitely one of my favorites in this contest, Charles! Congratulations on your win. Also, thanks for the help on the way to NJ. It was really nice chatting with you and Carolyn. I made it here to my sister's house just a short time ago. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/8/2010 12:47:00 PM

Charles congrats on your win in Andrea's contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2010 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations Charles on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/8/2010 8:06:00 AM

"Congratulations" on an excellent entry Charles!! Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/8/2010 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations on this well mdeserved win in the contest, Charles

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2010 5:31:00 AM

very nice!! congrats on the placement!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2010 4:13:00 AM

Charles,I am yawning right now because it is 5 a.m!! Congrats with your winning haiku. LUv, Andrea

Katherine Stella

Date: 10/3/2010 8:02:00 AM

I too did bears lol loved yours though gl my friend in Linda's contest looks like a winner to me keep up the wonderful work also so sry your other poem got outcasted by soup cause that was defintly a winner keep on rocking this town charles

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/28/2010 4:28:00 PM

enjoyed your poem...do you remember when they were building the super highway they have now?(in Atlanta) the construction slow downs were terrible and there were less lanes too and usually one of those was blocked for construction. yuck!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/28/2010 8:57:00 AM

What a delightful and creative entry for Andrea's contest, Charles. Indeed, you have approached this assignment with imaginative inspiration. Best wishes in Andrea's haiku contest. Love, Carolyn