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*I am practicing Tanka

The Bear

The bear swipes the leaves
It is looking for some food
Then it stops and stares
I don't know if it sees me
I am still, I am watching

Heidi Sands

8/7/17

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2017

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August 8, 2017 at 7:41 AM

Great tanka! It's best to watch that bear before he pounces.

August 8, 2017 at 7:43 AM

Yes, Thank you. M.L. :)

August 8, 2017 at 4:41 AM

What a lovely write this one is! I really enjoy writing, and especially reading Tankas, and this one is a fabulous one! Great Work!!

August 8, 2017 at 7:42 AM

Thank you so much Russell. :) I am happy you enjoyed this one.

August 7, 2017 at 6:04 PM

Nice tanka Heidi...

August 7, 2017 at 6:11 PM

Thanks Joseph :)

August 7, 2017 at 4:42 PM

keep your distance and watch with baited breath Heidi!:-) hugs Jan xx

August 7, 2017 at 5:19 PM

Yes, I will Jan. Thanks for your visit :)

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