The Bear

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*I am practicing Tanka

The bear swipes the leaves It is looking for some food Then it stops and stares I don't know if it sees me I am still, I am watching Heidi Sands 8/7/17

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/8/2017 7:41:00 AM

Great tanka! It's best to watch that bear before he pounces.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 7:43:00 AM

Yes, Thank you. M.L. :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/8/2017 4:41:00 AM

What a lovely write this one is! I really enjoy writing, and especially reading Tankas, and this one is a fabulous one! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 7:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Russell. :) I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Joseph May

Date: 8/7/2017 6:04:00 PM

Nice tanka Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/7/2017 6:11:00 PM

Thanks Joseph :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2017 4:42:00 PM

keep your distance and watch with baited breath Heidi!:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/7/2017 5:19:00 PM

Yes, I will Jan. Thanks for your visit :)