September Challenge Tritina Poetry Contest- Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich
With the sun rising, it was a beautiful day to be on the beach My love and I, on a quiet morning- together, we walked The rise of the sun and the rippling waters were touching Timing was perfect- we were holding hands and our lips were touching As we stood on the shore of the sandy, white-colored beach Seagulls seemed to circle just above everywhere we walked As the morning grew, and the sun in full bloom, again- we walked Then, we stood on the coast, still holding hands; still touching... together, we swam in the water of the sandy, white-colored beach Wet, we walked along the beach; touching lips- holding hands
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