The Beach

the beach

whitecaps overlapping the ocean
listening to the waves  come in as
the sun shines brightly on a new day
it is so inviting and
everything seems much better 
with the ocean roaring
it’s brand new every time
feel the sand beneath your feet
as you walk along taking it in
wondering where it all
comes from and where it goes
yet it does another dance
as before inviting you to
sit, walk, or just stand
and watch the most fantastic
show you will ever see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 15, 2011 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jerri. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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March 13, 2011 at 7:21 PM
Thank you Linda for your comment on my poem. I just came from the beach earlier taking sunset photos. Every word of my poem rang true as I walked along the beach watching the sunset.
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March 13, 2011 at 4:46 PM
Congrats Jerri on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. wonderful words to share with us all luv.. hope u are well my friend.. thinking of u and missing u too...
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