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The Beach

The beach where people Hangs out to relax, the sea Exuberant and inviting Cleanse people dirts And purify distressing souls The sand, so white by time The waves, never ending Back and forth to the shore Today, the beach cajolled by People in walks of life In beautiful swimsuit and trunks Adorned with colorful big umbrellas Medium size tints scattered in the sands Everyday, the scene is over and over again, I see no more privacy, it becomes a business I wonder when the beach become peaceful Just like before where you can have your own Contemplation with nature and have a simple Fishing adventure at the shoreline. It's just a dream for me right now No one will tell how it is to be back then.

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Date: 9/27/2024 3:44:00 PM
Hello Hugo, I enjoyed this poem. i could visikon the people on the beach. enjoy your weekend. Much love here. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2024 11:20:00 AM
Hello Hugo,I could vision the people on the beach. Does the beach you go to charge the people to be on thew beach Sabua Beach charges people parking their cars. Then they are allolwed on the beach. Much love here. /Darlene/
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 9/27/2024 6:56:00 PM
Hello, Darlene, same feeling with mine about the beach, modern beach is too much corrupted. Not like before, the beach is serene and stand in its naturalness. Today, too much of aggrandizement and profit. Life is too much to handle nature. Anyway, thank you, Darlene for the empathy. Love lots here. /Hugo.

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