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The Beach

We walked along the beach, talking Our breath smelled like coconut palms, Our palms grew trees, We got lost in the forest of our hands, Hoping not to get so heated up That we expose ourselves in a Blazing forest fire of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 12/11/2020 3:56:00 PM
Dear Juli, I enjoyed your beautiful beach poem, here in Canada we have snow, so it was a welcome sight, thank you for sharing, God bless
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Date: 12/11/2020 1:27:00 PM
Nice one Juli, nice to think of the beach in these dark winter days. Hope you're doing ok, blessings from Scotland, Gordon
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