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The Battle

A soldier in battle Hears the bullets rattle And is caught in the crossfire He is draped in the flag His medals turn to tags Silent and without desire Melancholy speaks truth Eternity meets youth Before his final salute

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Date: 12/22/2013 6:57:00 PM
Powerful lines: "Eternity meets youth Before his final salute". Congrats, Joseph!
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Date: 12/18/2013 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations Joseph.
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work.Sara
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Date: 12/15/2013 7:05:00 PM
Joseph, this spoke to me...Iwould have placed this higher, I think it is great. BG
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Date: 12/15/2013 4:13:00 PM
So true and sad Joseph, however congrats on thr H M Joe..)
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Date: 12/15/2013 12:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win Joseph, It was well written....Roger
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:35:00 AM
This is a sad but effective piece. Congratulations, I think it is very well written and filled with emotion, for me very touching.
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph xx
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Date: 12/15/2013 6:10:00 AM
Thanks for the placement DR Ram....
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:56:00 PM
Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Joseph
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:56:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love
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Date: 12/9/2013 11:55:00 PM
ah, another one for Ram's contest? Well done!!
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Date: 12/9/2013 1:10:00 PM
Sad one..Very creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats.Sara
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:13:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on battle, Joseph
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