The Bath

water steams past candlelight
a naked woman in a small room
full with hot, fragrant wetness
enveloping her body
releasing the tension of living
becoming just herself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Shelli. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Mcclaran Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:50 PM
thank you! i have a thing about wanting to capture little profound moments succinctly.
A   Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:41 PM
A very intresting read. Nice
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