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The Bath

The effulgent sun diving everyday in the river of darkness. What lose, burning him as fire? What blame, he bathing away?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2020 5:43:00 PM

Deep thoughts, Jenish. I just love the image of an "effulgent sun."

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/17/2020 11:39:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/17/2020 4:24:00 AM

Deep and thought provoking muse my friend. Blessings :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/17/2020 11:39:00 PM

Thank you Aditi..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/16/2020 7:10:00 PM

Right on! The sun has as much right as anyone or anything else to take a dip in the water! lol. Thanks, Jenish

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/17/2020 4:16:00 AM

lol.. Yes you are right.. But I have my rights to ask.. lol..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/16/2020 7:33:00 AM

That photo glitters in your words, Jenish--well done!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/17/2020 4:15:00 AM

Thank you Vijay...

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/16/2020 5:58:00 AM

the sun dives in the dark and rises next with full of fairness- there deep is dark!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/17/2020 4:15:00 AM

Thank you Mahtab..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/16/2020 4:40:00 AM

Captivating photo and Tanka, dearest Jenish! Hugs xxx We both were inspired by the sun today! Great!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/16/2020 5:02:00 AM

I just read your Haiku.. Great.. Thank you Demetrios..