The Bath

The effulgent sun
diving everyday in the
river of darkness.
What lose, burning him as fire?
What blame, he bathing away?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 5:43 PM
Deep thoughts, Jenish. I just love the image of an "effulgent sun."
Somadas Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:39 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:24 AM
Deep and thought provoking muse my friend. Blessings :)
Somadas Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:39 PM
Thank you Aditi..
Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 7:10 PM
Right on! The sun has as much right as anyone or anything else to take a dip in the water! lol. Thanks, Jenish
Somadas Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:16 AM
lol.. Yes you are right.. But I have my rights to ask.. lol..
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 7:33 AM
That photo glitters in your words, Jenish--well done!
Somadas Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:15 AM
Thank you Vijay...
Bangalee Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 5:58 AM
the sun dives in the dark and rises next with full of fairness- there deep is dark!
Somadas Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:15 AM
Thank you Mahtab..
Trifiatis Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 4:40 AM
Captivating photo and Tanka, dearest Jenish! Hugs xxx We both were inspired by the sun today! Great!
Somadas Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 5:02 AM
I just read your Haiku.. Great.. Thank you Demetrios..
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