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" HEART AND SOUL XX " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Whatever the heart desires it gets by bartering the tranquility of one's soul! © Demetrios Trifiatis 29 June 2018

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Date: 6/30/2018 11:36:00 AM
Dear Demetrios, I'm trying to keep up with your insightful pieces of art! You are challenging your reader with your profound enlightening writes! "Desires of the heart" to the detriment of soul! Our desires if not confined to reason we will be drifted away.. So how can we barter peace of mind and soul.. the creed of our core for our impulsion, blind passion, desires?! A great joy to read.. your beauties are a source of knowledge.. thank you so much for sharing. Stay safe and blessed always.
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Date: 6/30/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thank you for your noble gesture to visit and for your glorious analytic and profound comment dear, Besma! I really had missed it yesterday! I do appreciate it! God be with you as always He is!
Date: 6/30/2018 4:06:00 AM
Words of wisdom, beautifully expressed. Lovely flowers...
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Date: 6/30/2018 12:50:00 PM
You too kind dearest, Supraja! Thank you for your precious comment!
Date: 6/29/2018 5:09:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, another wonderful Monoku you place before us. No matter the difficulty we must keep the soul in harmony. These words come from your heart but through the soul. Within the soul lies our tranquility. There i shall find inner peace. I love the content of this one line, it says so much to me. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend....Mike.
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Date: 6/30/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit and comment my friend, Vladislav! God bless you !
Date: 6/29/2018 10:56:00 AM
Your wisdom always amazes me, my dear philosopher. I had never thought of it in such terms. By the way...lovely photo. Hugs
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:53:00 PM
My beloved friend, Eileen. It is always a great joy to see you commenting! Efxaristo aki polla filakia!
Date: 6/29/2018 10:28:00 AM
Interesting and thought provoking Demetrios. Beautiful flowers too :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:52:00 PM
Glad you think so dear, Heidi! Thank you for your kind visit!
Date: 6/29/2018 8:57:00 AM
Your heart through your beautiful soul...expresses itself very well...superbly said my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:51:00 PM
WW, what a delightful comment! So noble of you! Thank you my friend!
Date: 6/29/2018 7:49:00 AM
We should moderate our desires and not compromise the tranquility of the soul in any way. Tom
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:51:00 PM
Yes, we should dear friend, Tom otherwise we will be in deeper problem! Thank you!.
Date: 6/29/2018 7:37:00 AM
A profound thought my dearest friend, for it is not worth sacrificing the tranquility of one's soul and risk the loss of a soul just to satisfy any frivolous heart's desires.....Maria xxx
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you very much for your precious comment dearest, Maria! God bless you! XXX
Date: 6/29/2018 5:27:00 AM
DT.. deep when you think about the duties of a bartender and all they do.. so creative in your perfect word choice!
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:53:00 AM
Good example you have given here my friend, L.M. It goes without saying that our bartender could provide us with innumerable examples! Thank you so much!
Date: 6/29/2018 5:25:00 AM
Your poem is as awesome as the beautiful flowers from your garden. Truth well spoken, my friend!
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:51:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation my dear friend , Vijay! God b;ess you!

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