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The Barred Spiral

Tilted nipple, lend
Your acquiescent ballast
To rotate earths breast

Referring to the “Milky Way”
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*Inspired by Raul Moreno's  
Nature's Best Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 12, 2009 at 9:28 AM

Excellent Haiku. I don't think there is a form of poetry that you Sandra can not do. Love reading your poetry. Love, Carol

James Fraser

June 14, 2009 at 5:34 AM

Clever write Sandra, the most grown up of Haiku>>James

Nadia Shahwan

May 20, 2009 at 10:59 AM

Beautiful chosen words. Thank you for commenting over my poem Isabella d-este...if you print her picture and highlighted; you can discover unique things.

Nathan Leccese

May 19, 2009 at 3:53 PM

I agree with John. I'm going to keep my mouth shut. Great Haiku though. Thanks for the comments also. Nate

John Loving Iii

May 19, 2009 at 2:11 PM

Respectfully; I decline to comment. John

Sharon Winter

May 19, 2009 at 7:14 AM

Wow. You are seriously amazing. Unique in your talent! I am always left in awe. Good luck! Love, Shar

James Peranteau

May 19, 2009 at 2:15 AM

Sandra,..I feel the power of unison here,...the heavens and earth,..to me at least,..I love this! Great poem! james

Sean Kelly

May 19, 2009 at 1:11 AM

Now , who else could have phrased a piece like this ??? Most inventive and unusual , as ever AA . Best of luck in the contest and I wonder what size " bra " is needed !! Ohhh Yes , it's a "wonder-bra" !!!! ...