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The Barred Owl Preys

The fierce owl preys at night, wings spread wide It's dusk and the winds howl a warning Rabbits, and rodents scatter to hide The barred owl will hunt until morning It's dusk and the winds howl a warning A crow swoops down to protect its nest The barred owl will hunt until morning The hungry owl soon leaves, knows it's best A crow swoops down to protect its nest Rabbits and rodents come out again The hungry owl soon leaves, knows it's best In a tree the crow is perched in vain Rabbits and rodents come out again Rabbits, and rodents scatter to hide In a tree the crow is perched in vain The fierce owl preys at night, wings spread wide 5/7/2020 I originally wrote this for Eve's contest but then realized it is not written in personification form. I decided to post it anyway, but not for the contest.

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Date: 5/14/2020 5:07:00 PM
oh Tania such a disappointment for you but a joy for us to be able to read, the image you chose was the most difficult of all to write about you did it so well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/14/2020 5:18:00 PM
Thanks Jan, that's what I get for not following directions! :)
Date: 5/10/2020 10:45:00 PM
A difficult form and you did it so well. Bravo.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/11/2020 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Rick!
Date: 5/8/2020 8:40:00 PM
Hello Tania … certainly an enjoyable poem to read which shows how these silent hunters of the night are so feared - thank you Tania - Lindsay
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/9/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay
Date: 5/8/2020 12:28:00 AM
Nicely done, Tania, I really like it. Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/8/2020 4:50:00 AM
Thank you Eve, unfortunately I didn't pay close enough attention to your contest directions but decided to post it anyway.
Date: 5/7/2020 10:51:00 PM
So sad this doesn't fit the contest guidelines - it really paints a vibrant background for your story. I enjoyed it.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/8/2020 4:50:00 AM
Thank you Sam!

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