The Baroness

The land was barren of hope and desire 
and she was it's queen tonight...

The glowing beauty she once shared with her kingdom
covered beneath the rubble
The land demanded of her to conceive and revive
but she was too far gone
Barren not of the womb but of desire
to subject new life to this fire
The fire that raged and consumed 
and stripped away their glory
The fire that would always burn
as long as the world kept turning
I am, she cried, simply what I am…
Broken, Bruised, and Dyeing
There’s no use to conceive a life
in a mind that’s always crying         
I gave my all, I paid my dues
and never was it enough 
So I remain a Baroness and always will I be…		
The Baroness in a Barren land
to a kingdom that would never be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marie Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 6:01 AM
Though quite sad, the ingenuity and big bold language is incredibly well crafted. The "Baroness and Barren" adds such richness, this is vivid, excellent writing Chris :-) The solemnity of the last line is exceptional. A pleasure to read :-) many blessings to you :-) lynn
Hagy Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Thanks so much for reading today Lynn:) Thanks for your wonderfully encouraging words. Glad you could find pleasure of word play in a solemn write:) Happy March:)
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 4:57 PM
I love all the word play with Baroness and Barren land in a kingdom that will never be. Very creative work, Chris.
Hagy Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Sorry I've been away...now working on my book edits in spare time. Thanks so much for the encouragement, I wrote this one when I was younger, and I'm glad you see the creativity of the word play:) Happy March Andrea (I'll try to post more)
Kannan Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 3:20 AM
So deep but beautiful write... A big 7...
Hagy Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Thanks for visiting me today:) and for your kind words! I am glad for the words to express both sorrow and joy
Callus Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 3:50 PM
The barren baroness! How sadly expressive this is, Chris...to be barren of hope and desires; surely there must be a way out!! Regards // paul
Hagy Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 1:59 PM
A much older write from a much younger me...although I am still sad for this world some days.
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