The Bar

You will  see me stopping here
To watch this bar fill up with laughter
Between the darkest evening of the year
And the dusty light that has drawn us near.

You must think my accent is strange
Mumbling sounds in a downy lake 
With effectual ease and hoary winding age 
For a stranger to ask if there is some mistake.

Although your acquaintance is lovely
This red street is dangerously dark and deep
And I have far to go before I sleep in the ally
Where fear is the only other sound to weep.

At the collects bar, the tourist ask 
Whose drinks are these you did not know? 
I could only see the glow in the glasses
filled with deadly ice-cold snow.

The moment finally came after living hard 
with poise and strength, and gritted teeth,
In all the dangers you have survived 
breathless bodies in paradise plated in the heat 

Blood on the bar appears to most as sauve 
The center of activity to be loved and hate 
With dark clouds and lights lowered above
Red ground, saddest verge feels the weight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/11/2022 5:41:00 PM
thank you I very much like the start of it friend... Coy I will end up reading the rest..... I'll get though it somehow THANKs for the poem man
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