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The Baobab Tree

This fat lady in a dinner dress Raises its crooked fingers up high On this moon lit night The moon is full It shines through the fingers Like a scene Out of a horror film And if a raven came and perched On one of this fat lady's arms I swear my heart would start And I'd run in terror Away from this baobab tree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/3/2011 10:41:00 AM
thanks alot for your nice comments. looking forward to reading your stuff too. :)
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Date: 9/25/2011 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful imagery...good work!
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:19:00 AM
Personification of the baobab......its a real delight!
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