The Baobab Tree

This fat lady in a dinner dress
Raises its crooked fingers up high
On this moon lit night
The moon is full
It shines through the fingers
Like a scene
Out of a horror film
And if a raven came and perched
On one of this fat lady's arms
I swear my heart would start
And I'd run in terror
Away from this baobab tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Masido Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 10:41 AM
thanks alot for your nice comments. looking forward to reading your stuff too. :)
Alumbugu Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Beautiful imagery...good work!
Gangabissoon Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Personification of the baobab......its a real delight!
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