The Band - a French Pantoum

We walk the street this day,
we hold each other's hand.
Our talk is month of May,
when we shall hear the band.

We hold each other's hand,
we speak of things we like.
When we shall hear the band,
for them we'll take a hike.

We speak of things we like,
her students will be there.
For them we'll take a hike,
our friends will play with care.

Her students will be there,
we walk the street this day.
Our friends will play with care,
our talk is month of May.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 12:16 PM
I do enjoy writing and reading the pantoum form - a fun write Alfred I think I would like to join in and listen to the band too:-) hugs Jan xx
Berggren Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 1:56 PM
Thanks Jan for reading my poem. I think a third person would be great.
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