The Balking Mire of Fanghandrath

The Balking Mire of Fanghandrath



‘Twas late when the misted veils
Suck and drew
‘pon the reeking fetters of claxon screams
Wailing echoed dismal to

Too late for lantern to pick a path
In the trickster passages
Of the boggish marsh
The Balking Mires of Fanghandrath

Where ‘oer the shake-ed sheaves domain
The Shadow Hunter was know to claim
The souls of less fortune given men
Or the eyes of the innocent

Aye ! They told the story well
Should the hunter of shadows
‘pon your path befall
would devour all in The Balking Mires of Fanghandrath

But needs must some they need
To prove their bravery
Of foolish men never seen again
Returning from the trickster paths of Fanghandrath

Of one such a man who’s courage by beer
Was made stalwart young and without fear
Through the haunted waste he dared to travel
When the misted veils suck and drew

Not yet half way there before the chill ate his bones
And from the rear the rushing fear
Did The Shadow Hunter draw ‘pon his heart
In noisome fog the Rake appeared

Too far to hear the sounds of screams
Too lost in the mazes of dead beaten reeds
To mouth-less to utter a prayer
And beseech the fate of balking mires

No wind it was the laugh, the laugh of Fanghandrath
The hunger of its desolate seed
To feed ‘pon the soul
Of innocent and less fortune given men

‘Twas not till dawn when he reached the rim
Ashen grey his youth had gone
And no shadow did he cast in morning sun
No shadows fall on The Balking Mires of Fanghandrath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 11:03 AM
a truly memorable poem! Colin! Jim
Jordan Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Thank you Colin and i will certainly mention the inspiration - Many ways this poem reminded me of Prison - I think it was quite the tale - very impressive, God Bless,mj it is a favorite of mine
Jordan Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 3:17 PM
Colin that was a hell of one fine tale - It has inspired me to write a similar one regarding a Prison I was in - I'm asking your permission of course and they are totally different but I believe that if one poet is inspired by another's work he should have the respect to ask - god Bless you bro, let me know ok, MJ
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