The Baggage of An Afflicted Childhood

The SEVERITY of remembering her childhood brings so much sadness
into her delicate heart.
The clarity I wish to give her ….       -oh, if only I could…
             -but where would I even start?
Those dark brown eyes turn shades of blue I’d never before seen,
while she tries to do her daily routine.
The cries do  f a d e  eventually, but her soul always  s c a r r e d.

Is this baggage? 

Would I call it trouble I brought upon myself when we first met?
Probably          .....      but in a good way-
Because learning how to treat her gently, I shall never forget-
Her touch, full of  r e g r e t  and I continue speaking without thinking…
Oh, I have so much to say- but her essence that  f l o w s …-keeps sinking. 

            The belongings she does tow   -  like a heavy trunk of cargo…
                      -oh, the SEVERITY of afflicted childhood sorrow.




Gems For Your Baggage
January 30, 2017
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U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 10:50 AM
So sad and so unfortunate that every child is not lucky to have a sound childhood....Congrats! :)
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 4:07 PM
such a touching poem, congrats on your win LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 4:00 PM
This is very sensitive and a touching poem you wrote,Laura. Big Congrats on your win.
Devonshire Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 3:55 PM
It is sad to meet someone whose childhood was filled with so much pain. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Laura!
Parker Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:06 PM
as the child of an abusive parent the baggage never leaves it's just covered in scars you carry for life..good luck dear poet
Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 1:02 PM
The baggage of disturbing childhood, u expressed and depicted it awesome. Esp admire the creatively crafted last two lines though the entire poem is great, poignant and rhymed wonderfully. Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest. And hapy new yr.
Wolf Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Well done, Laura, a very touching poem!
Gupta Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Nice poem of ever-burdening baggage ... Great job ...
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