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“The Backburn”
Sands slip through a shrinking tide chair's facing away from the Sun back turned on the backburn facing the past you are still here you are still here back turned on the backburn ocean slides hypnotic undertow nipping at your toes you’re speaking to empty chairs silent witnesses shared Time speaks of limitations here lies the tear you are still here you are still here immortal reverberation Your own personal Revelation standing you walk towards your worst fear the source of who you are appears Empty Chair Swallowed by The Air cleared on The Ocean of Empathy brutal and clean no shoes no keys naked Cell Encapsulation Shrink Wrapped You’ve disappeared Nascita di Venere meets Caravaggio The Boy Bitten by a Lizard Another dimension Blessed or cursed You are Now here You are Now here No derisive division Equal Parts won ONE (LadyLabyrinth/2019)
https://youtu.be/jG3QIfyqZck “On ne peut rien en dire”/Jean-Louis Murat
Author's notes: 1. Caravaggio ... v. interesting character https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Caravaggio 2. The Boy and the Lizard (a) https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s12682-012-0124-z (b) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boy_Bitten_by_a_Lizard

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Date: 6/23/2019 6:37:00 PM
to cross the sands of low tide in quiet murmurings from the mind where there is only one question to ponder...who picks up the empty chair?
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 6/23/2019 7:49:00 PM
It gets washed out to sea, the Ocean swallows it up. Sonnet 106 ...
Date: 6/23/2019 7:55:00 AM
"Another dimension Blessed or cursed" Well written...
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Date: 6/23/2019 1:53:00 PM
certainly not from the enchanted forest, a far far different dimension. Thanks Arturo.
Date: 6/23/2019 7:37:00 AM
I like your style. This is quite good. Thanks for your visit.
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Date: 6/23/2019 1:54:00 PM
Lamoureux, I haven't visited you yet...what libation have you partaken of tonight/err today...I shall away at some point to read your tomes. Lovejoy-Burton from the Tomb of Love (aka The Wailing Wall).

Book: Shattered Sighs