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The Back Porch

The porch is waiting dare you go? with chairs so comfy cozy… The porch is waiting don’t you know? with checker boards and pages…. Patterned puzzles gory books needle point and bikes The porch is waiting can you go? Or must you stay inside?

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2009 10:29:00 AM

Sounds like an ideal retreat. Keep writing. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 10/13/2009 1:37:00 PM

I'll be there. Hey! Deb. Umberall is fixed, so I will entered it again. Love, Lainie

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/13/2009 5:10:00 AM

Hello Deborah, Nice poem , Thank you for your comments on my poem Africa , My english is not very good as for punctuation pretty much non existant i would say its something i will have some one look into. Cheers , Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/12/2009 2:54:00 PM

Loved this charmer!! We spend a lot of time in the evening out on our front porch...have the best view of the mountains, and the sunset from there! ( and baseball games in our front yard). There is something rather old-fashioned and nostalgic about porches....people used to use them more in the old days .... now people are too focused on what's on TV .... how sad is that??? Nice poem!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/12/2009 12:40:00 PM

i love to stay in the porch,it seems so welcoming..excellent ,i really enjoy your writes dear friend--Charma