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The Bacchus Garden

Your tender body
is a fertile garden
where flowers bloom
beautiful and animated.

Sanctuary of desire
in their domain
pursuing eternal splendor
splashed in golden water..

Paradise under captive sky
scent of Magnolia in country
my hands touch in the instant
lips upon your lovely petals.

This morning in your garden
with you in sighing sanctuary
on our hands love expired
overgrown with Springtime flowers...
~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/30/2014 8:41:00 AM
Bacchanalians sure had the right idea (don't forget the wine), love this little piece.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/30/2014 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Amy..Delighted you enjoyed this one..
Date: 3/30/2014 1:36:00 AM
The sanctuary of fragrant scent is in your hands today...A very romantic and beautiful poem.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/30/2014 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine for visiting,,
Date: 3/29/2014 10:46:00 PM
WOW, what a gorgeous poem!! One of the prettiest I have seen today.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/29/2014 10:51:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for the lovely visit!
Date: 3/29/2014 3:52:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic work that you have penned..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/29/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 3/29/2014 1:31:00 PM
- You decorates the woman body with flowers and sweet kisses - Truly a beautiful picture from you, Ken! - Hope your weekend will be springlike and beautiful ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/29/2014 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Anne for the lovely comment..

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