The Bacchus Garden

Your tender body
is a fertile garden
where flowers bloom
beautiful and animated.

Sanctuary of desire
in their domain
pursuing eternal splendor
splashed in golden water..

Paradise under captive sky
scent of Magnolia in country
my hands touch in the instant
lips upon your lovely petals.

This morning in your garden
with you in sighing sanctuary
on our hands love expired
overgrown with Springtime flowers...
~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 30, 2014 at 8:41 AM
Bacchanalians sure had the right idea (don't forget the wine), love this little piece.
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March 30, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Amy..Delighted you enjoyed this one..
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March 30, 2014 at 1:36 AM
The sanctuary of fragrant scent is in your hands today...A very romantic and beautiful poem.
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March 30, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Charmaine for visiting,,
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March 29, 2014 at 10:46 PM
WOW, what a gorgeous poem!! One of the prettiest I have seen today.
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March 29, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Thank you Andrea for the lovely visit!
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March 29, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Ahh!! Romantic work that you have penned..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
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March 29, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Thank you Sara!
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March 29, 2014 at 1:31 PM
- You decorates the woman body with flowers and sweet kisses - Truly a beautiful picture from you, Ken! - Hope your weekend will be springlike and beautiful ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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March 29, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Thanks Anne for the lovely comment..
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