The Babies Don'T Cry

Cry
Once
Then none
Flint River
Thrown from bridge two small
Babies sister brother drowned
Every time go by I hear the children cry call me
Mother experienced temporary insanity threw them from bridge to swift water
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 10:59 AM
need to work on the punctuation
Hilliker Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 3:31 PM
Sad but nice Fibonacci, Sara. It's a disgrace how children suffer sometimes.
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 3:10 PM
This was so sad but a good read.Teresa
Fraser Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 2:51 PM
Oh my, what a sad poem Sara >> James
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