The Awakening

It is the awakening. After long dreamless sleep, my time has come again. Through endless cycles of night and day, of heat and cold I have lived throughout history. My birth unremembered as is my youth. I have lived for a thousand years but too many years have passed for concern over such trivial matters. I remember the long decades without water. I was in my middle years then. A time when almost everything was lost. This was the time of the great fire. The fire that almost consumed me. Bright white flames burned down from the heavens and in an instant scarred my rugged flesh, my beautiful skin blackened in jagged disfigurement. Many of those around me perished. I can no longer mourn those who have gone before me. It has been too long and in that time I have recovered from my injuries and the disease that followed. I am again strong and tower over the youth that surrounds me, young ones of a hundred years. Many my own. Now I must concentrate on drinking in the nutrients that the earth provides me, as I watch over the shrinking forest. The past is the past and the receding winter is slowly fading away, now I have felt the long rays of the sun warming my limbs once again and I have awakened to a new world, a world of renewal, a world of hope. My trunk is strong and my pollen will soon fill the air covering the woods in a yellow green dust. New life will come as acorns sprout, and I will stand silent watch.
08/24/15
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September 4, 2015 at 6:07 PM
James, Congratulations on your "Trees Personified" win.... SKAT
Inman Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 8:49 PM
Thanks SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:37 PM
So glad this one made the list in the contest. It was a very well deserved win, James! I am finishing up here tonight and just wanted to wish you a good night!
Inman Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 9:18 AM
Thank you Andrea and a belated good night to you.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Very wonderful write James! Congrats on awesome win!
Inman Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 12:54 AM
Dr. Sharma, thank you for your nice comment.
Roper Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 8:33 PM
Wonderful description and flowing poem. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Inman Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 12:53 AM
Thank you Eve
Puddifoot Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 6:55 PM
good, solid writing here to match the tree, and very creative with the shape; the latter part of the poem is particularly strong - congrats on your win in my contest
Inman Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 8:02 PM
Charlotte, thank you so much for the kind words and for hosting the contest. I enjoyed being a part of it.
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations James :-) Hugs Jan xx
Inman Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 7:42 PM
As always, thank you Jan.
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 10:56 PM
wowowow, I love YOUR OAK tree and the way you shaped it just like a big beautiful strong oak. GREAT JOB!! Hope this makes the list! a SEVEN
Inman Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Don't know what constitutes an illustration. If the tree shape is one it may not do well at all. I haven't placed in a couple contests lately.
Muideen Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 11:46 AM
What a lovely write, it flows smoothly in the heart of the readers. Good luck in the contest................A.M.
Inman Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Thank you AM.
United Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 1:34 PM
WOW James wonderful personification and the shape poem is superb - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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