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The Awakening

It is the awakening. After long dreamless sleep, my time has come again. Through endless cycles of night and day, of heat and cold I have lived throughout history. My birth unremembered as is my youth. I have lived for a thousand years but too many years have passed for concern over such trivial matters. I remember the long decades without water. I was in my middle years then. A time when almost everything was lost. This was the time of the great fire. The fire that almost consumed me. Bright white flames burned down from the heavens and in an instant scarred my rugged flesh, my beautiful skin blackened in jagged disfigurement. Many of those around me perished. I can no longer mourn those who have gone before me. It has been too long and in that time I have recovered from my injuries and the disease that followed. I am again strong and tower over the youth that surrounds me, young ones of a hundred years. Many my own. Now I must concentrate on drinking in the nutrients that the earth provides me, as I watch over the shrinking forest. The past is the past and the receding winter is slowly fading away, now I have felt the long rays of the sun warming my limbs once again and I have awakened to a new world, a world of renewal, a world of hope. My trunk is strong and my pollen will soon fill the air covering the woods in a yellow green dust. New life will come as acorns sprout, and I will stand silent watch.
08/24/15

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Date: 9/4/2015 6:07:00 PM
James, Congratulations on your "Trees Personified" win.... SKAT
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James Inman
Date: 9/4/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 9/2/2015 10:37:00 PM
So glad this one made the list in the contest. It was a very well deserved win, James! I am finishing up here tonight and just wanted to wish you a good night!
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James Inman
Date: 9/3/2015 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Andrea and a belated good night to you.
Date: 8/30/2015 11:44:00 PM
Very wonderful write James! Congrats on awesome win!
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James Inman
Date: 8/31/2015 12:54:00 AM
Dr. Sharma, thank you for your nice comment.
Date: 8/30/2015 8:33:00 PM
Wonderful description and flowing poem. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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James Inman
Date: 8/31/2015 12:53:00 AM
Thank you Eve
Date: 8/30/2015 6:55:00 PM
good, solid writing here to match the tree, and very creative with the shape; the latter part of the poem is particularly strong - congrats on your win in my contest
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James Inman
Date: 8/30/2015 8:02:00 PM
Charlotte, thank you so much for the kind words and for hosting the contest. I enjoyed being a part of it.
Date: 8/30/2015 4:51:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations James :-) Hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 8/30/2015 7:42:00 PM
As always, thank you Jan.
Date: 8/26/2015 10:56:00 PM
wowowow, I love YOUR OAK tree and the way you shaped it just like a big beautiful strong oak. GREAT JOB!! Hope this makes the list! a SEVEN
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James Inman
Date: 8/26/2015 11:40:00 PM
Don't know what constitutes an illustration. If the tree shape is one it may not do well at all. I haven't placed in a couple contests lately.
Date: 8/25/2015 11:46:00 AM
What a lovely write, it flows smoothly in the heart of the readers. Good luck in the contest................A.M.
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James Inman
Date: 8/27/2015 9:20:00 PM
Thank you AM.
Date: 8/24/2015 1:34:00 PM
WOW James wonderful personification and the shape poem is superb - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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