The Awaited Realization

My Reflection, 
As i stare at you, 
My uniform disheveled,
The aura of loneliness only too obvious,
I think to myself, 
What am i in your eyes?

My Reflection, 
As i stare at you, 
I reminisce,
Oh how enigmatic you were,
Gave everyone a chance to see you whole,
I look at you now,
Someone i barely recognize, 
But i still wonder,
What am i in your eyes?

My Reflection,
As i stare at you,
As i look into your eyes, 
My mind wonders to the dead,
How young and beautiful they might be,
Suddenly death is such a good word,
I source for answers,
What am i in your eyes?

My Reflection,
As i stare at you, 
As a drop of tear,
Makes its way down your spotted cheek,
I wish you wouldn't cry,
I wish i could embrace you,
Restore you, Assure you,
But you yield no response, 
So i ask,
What am i in your eyes?

My Reflection,
As i stare at you,
As i watch you painfully bleed,
You look at me,
As if longing for my embrace,
Our eyes meet,
Should i just let you bleed?
Should i let those tears run?
Or should i free you miss,
From the bondage you built for yourself,
You look away,
What am i in your eyes?

My Reflection,
As i stare at you,
Suddenly all your flaws become priceless,
Your beauty surpasses all,
You smile,
My heart is glad,
A goddess in my eyes,
But,
What am i in your eyes?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/22/2015 7:08:00 PM
Brenda, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Brenda Sabana
Date: 9/23/2015 1:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Skat!
Date: 9/22/2015 1:09:00 AM
Wonderful expressions Brenda! Congrats on big win! There I see you are new at soup, warm welcome n wud love to read more of u! Keep ur words flowing!
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Brenda Sabana
Date: 9/22/2015 3:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr Upma!
Date: 9/10/2015 12:32:00 PM
Brenda, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Brenda Sabana
Date: 9/22/2015 3:32:00 AM
hallo there!! thank you very much for the warm welcome. i am very excited to meet other great poets such as yourself in this site!
Date: 9/8/2015 8:39:00 AM
Brenda, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:35:00 AM
Skat! what a way to welcome me! thank you very much for the warm welcome. I appreciate it very much! I am really excited about this and i cannot wait to meet other like minded poets and writers from all over the globe such as yourself!! Thank you once again.
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