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The Autumn Snake

A snake Sheds his old skin Starting life fresh. Written for "Fall Animal Haiku Contest"

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Date: 10/9/2010 11:04:00 PM
nice one JImmy, congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this terrific poem. The message in it is excellent >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:44:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your HM in Andrea's contest... with this interesting piece ... great point here too.. enjoyed and u enjoy your special honor my friend with luv..
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:27:00 PM
There was certainly more to this haiku than could be seen on the surface, Jimmy. One of the best entries I have read, for sure. Congrats on your HM in Andrea's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:07:00 PM
Jimmy, congrats on your HM in Andrea's contest ;)
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on your HM. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deservfed win in the contest, Jimmy
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:07:00 AM
Congrats on your HM in my contest, Jimmy. And thanks so much for supporting my contest. I liked your choice of animal. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2010 10:18:00 AM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Jimmy. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:03:00 PM
Hey JAM! I wish you good luck with your Haiku for Andrea's Contest, JAM. Sounds like you've got a winner here! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:34:00 PM
good one, good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:38:00 PM
Very clever approach to the contest, Jimmy. And it really says much more beneath the surface. We all deserve a chance to shed our old skin and start a new life. And the time is coming when you'll be doing just that! Great entry and I wish you success in Andrea's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/28/2010 1:37:00 PM
Great entry for Andrea's contest Jimmy. Good luck to you ;)
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Date: 9/28/2010 1:05:00 PM
Very wonderful write on the state of a snake, Nice observation, Jimmy
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