The Autumn Rain

The Autumn Rain
reminds me the feelings
that I didn’t express
The fresh air after rain
reminds me the moments
I wanted to live
The smell in the air
reminds me those moments when I used to meet you
and the wind takes them away
The yellow leaves
falling down on the streets
and I realize how
I’m loosing time, losing you
like the trees are losing the leaves
There will be new leaves on the trees
new people in your life
but the leaves on the streets will be forgotten, will be rotten

Just like me

– Spica

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/31/2017 4:39:00 PM
I love it, and hope not to be forgotten. Congrats
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Spica Toska
Date: 3/31/2017 6:46:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 1/27/2017 1:13:00 PM
A beautiful ouch. Great poem.
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Spica Toska
Date: 3/31/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/25/2017 9:30:00 PM
Oh, I am sorry that you lost your old leaf, and hope that you may have found a new leaf. Good write.
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 1/19/2017 2:26:00 PM
Oh and welcome to the soup and hope to read more.
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Date: 1/20/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/19/2017 2:25:00 PM
Good imagery and sad, I hope you found a new leaf.
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