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The Autumn Rain

The Autumn Rain reminds me the feelings that I didn’t express The fresh air after rain reminds me the moments I wanted to live The smell in the air reminds me those moments when I used to meet you and the wind takes them away The yellow leaves falling down on the streets and I realize how I’m loosing time, losing you like the trees are losing the leaves There will be new leaves on the trees new people in your life but the leaves on the streets will be forgotten, will be rotten Just like me – Spica

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/31/2017 4:39:00 PM
I love it, and hope not to be forgotten. Congrats
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Spica Toska
Date: 3/31/2017 6:46:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 1/27/2017 1:13:00 PM
A beautiful ouch. Great poem.
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Spica Toska
Date: 3/31/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/25/2017 9:30:00 PM
Oh, I am sorry that you lost your old leaf, and hope that you may have found a new leaf. Good write.
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Spica Toska
Date: 1/26/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 1/19/2017 2:26:00 PM
Oh and welcome to the soup and hope to read more.
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Spica Toska
Date: 1/20/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/19/2017 2:25:00 PM
Good imagery and sad, I hope you found a new leaf.
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