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Written - 24th September 2024

 

The Autumn Gala

Autumn's gala is out there on display Rocking and rolling the senses away In the magical splendour of the fall That captivates the hearts of one and all. Elegant is the autumn time of year When leaves adjust the colours of their gear From leaves of green to gold, yellow and red Before they fall onto their sleepy bed. Join in the dancing o'er whispering breeze That sway regal branches of stately trees Lifting leaves to float down to their demise In the gala of autumn's paradise. Autumn reminds us that life doesn’t last So we should enjoy each moment that’s cast Life is a precious God given treasure That leads to His Holy house for ever.
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Date: 9/25/2024 10:45:00 AM
Dear Beryl, I want to be invited to the Gala that you are going to because it is everything that Autumn is about. Including the help of our great Lord!. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/25/2024 11:34:00 AM
Dear Daniel, of course you are invited to autumn’s Gala, to dance in sync to the dancing leaves as they fall, a wonderful time is to be had by all. Blessings to you too, dear poet friend… Beryl
Date: 9/25/2024 10:37:00 AM
I loved reading your wonderful Autumn write/story. A pretty picture. What a great ending. I love this time of the year. Wish it would stay longer.... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/25/2024 11:25:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Paul, I love autumn too. Enjoy a poetic day in every wonderful way… Beryl
Date: 9/25/2024 4:48:00 AM
Autumn and spring my favourite seasons you should enter the Autumn Haiku contest sister Beryl.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/25/2024 10:33:00 AM
Thank you brother John, Haiku doesn’t come easy to me, but maybe, I’ll see… Sis Beryl
Date: 9/25/2024 4:24:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive poem Beryl. I loved the picture you paint in words - Seeing Tom's comments made me think of Japan which we visited a few times but none so awesome as in Autumn in the cherry blossom season. I trust Alan will be better enough to travel a bit with you - Hugs Maria
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/25/2024 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Maria, how lovely that you got to visit Japan, especially seeing the awesome of autumn. I hope one day Alan and me will be able to have a holiday. We had some wonderful holidays in the past, I’m very happy with that, whatever the future brings. Hugs returned… Beryl
Date: 9/24/2024 9:06:00 PM
Beautiful season it is too Beryl, would love to go to New England to see the amazing colours. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/24/2024 9:19:00 PM
Thank you Tom, I would love to do that too, but sadly Alan can’t do holidays any more, too many health problems stand in the way… Beryl
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