Aiyah Torres Poet Sijo

The Aura of Life

Amidst of stress and weakening soul inside the temple.

                     Hovering over the silence and freedom in the room. 
                        
                               Releasing a positive aura in meditation.













~~just another try~~

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Paul Callus May 19, 2014 at 10:14 AM Hi AiyaH! Loved this sijo...temple of meditation. cu // paul Aiyah Torres May 19, 2014 at 10:28 AM Thank you, Paul... Thanks for accepting my friend request in FB.. :O)))

Deborah Shiells May 12, 2014 at 4:31 PM Hi Aiyah, I would have never known that if you didn't tell Me. Thank you very much for clarifying. Never the less my friend it was very beautiful. Thanks Peace, Deborah

Deborah Shiells May 12, 2014 at 3:48 PM Hi Aiyah, OK where is it? That gold tipped pen... This was deep short and perfect. Thank you for sharing this my friend. Thanks for being the soul that you are. Peace, Deborah Aiyah Torres May 12, 2014 at 3:58 PM It's a temple of buddhist here in our country.. I haven't been in hte place.. I wish I could be there one time... :O)) Thanks for dropping by ,dear friend!! ^_^

Kim Van Breda May 9, 2014 at 7:18 AM Beautiful and intricately written words. Aiyah Torres May 12, 2014 at 3:57 PM Thank you so much for dropping by ,Kim!!! hugs .. ^__^

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2014 at 9:43 PM Hi, sweetie dessert lover!! Good to see from this that you are also the meditative sort. Love how you put a positive aura into this one. Aiyah Torres May 9, 2014 at 7:17 AM Hello Andrea... it's a pleasure to see your comment gain.. Thanks lot!!! :O)) ..I really enjoyed your blogs!! those details are so interesting.. and it fed my brain so well..haha... TYSSM!!!

David Williams May 8, 2014 at 2:15 PM Aiyah I love this, very visual and very well done...David Aiyah Torres May 8, 2014 at 3:27 PM Thank you ,David!! ..I missed your presence here in Soup.. !! ^_^

Ivor Kos May 8, 2014 at 1:48 PM I hope it doesn't annoy you I like this poem. I'm learning what a Siljo is. Very interesting. Aiyah Torres May 8, 2014 at 3:27 PM lol.. the pleasure is mine, Ivo!! Thanks a lot!!! ^_^