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The Aura of Life

Amidst of stress and weakening soul inside the temple. Hovering over the silence and freedom in the room. Releasing a positive aura in meditation. ~~just another try~~

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/19/2014 10:14:00 AM

Hi AiyaH! Loved this sijo...temple of meditation. cu // paul

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/19/2014 10:28:00 AM

Thank you, Paul... Thanks for accepting my friend request in FB.. :O)))

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/12/2014 4:31:00 PM

Hi Aiyah, I would have never known that if you didn't tell Me. Thank you very much for clarifying. Never the less my friend it was very beautiful. Thanks Peace, Deborah

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/12/2014 3:48:00 PM

Hi Aiyah, OK where is it? That gold tipped pen... This was deep short and perfect. Thank you for sharing this my friend. Thanks for being the soul that you are. Peace, Deborah

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/12/2014 3:58:00 PM

It's a temple of buddhist here in our country.. I haven't been in hte place.. I wish I could be there one time... :O)) Thanks for dropping by ,dear friend!! ^_^

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/9/2014 7:18:00 AM

Beautiful and intricately written words.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/12/2014 3:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for dropping by ,Kim!!! hugs .. ^__^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2014 9:43:00 PM

Hi, sweetie dessert lover!! Good to see from this that you are also the meditative sort. Love how you put a positive aura into this one.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/9/2014 7:17:00 AM

Hello Andrea... it's a pleasure to see your comment gain.. Thanks lot!!! :O)) ..I really enjoyed your blogs!! those details are so interesting.. and it fed my brain so well..haha... TYSSM!!!

David Williams

Date: 5/8/2014 2:15:00 PM

Aiyah I love this, very visual and very well done...David

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/8/2014 3:27:00 PM

Thank you ,David!! ..I missed your presence here in Soup.. !! ^_^

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/8/2014 1:48:00 PM

I hope it doesn't annoy you I like this poem. I'm learning what a Siljo is. Very interesting.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/8/2014 3:27:00 PM

lol.. the pleasure is mine, Ivo!! Thanks a lot!!! ^_^