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Quatern
A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two third line of stanza three and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)

As the audience falls silent, the lights dim; the curtain gets drawn. And a magical night begins, launched upon a sea of whispers. Fantasy folds reality as the audience falls silent. And imagination takes hold, overpowering all reason. Music and motion in tandem give sway to possibilities. As the audience falls silent and deeper down the rabbit hole. Illusion leads to amazement unfettered by doubt's disbelief. And alternate truths improvise as the audience falls silent. (Quatern) 5/10/2021 The Audience Falls Silent Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 5/14/2021 8:02:00 AM
"As the audience falls silent" seem magically fit for a title. I glide with the flow of each stanza and appreciate you showing what silence does.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/15/2021 12:27:00 PM
Thanks Iris, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/11/2021 8:29:00 AM
Beautifully-written and well-thought-out, Emile. I think you will find yourself near the top in Kai's contest. Best wishes.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/11/2021 10:10:00 AM
Thanks Milt, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/10/2021 4:54:00 PM
Wonderful verse and vision. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2021 7:24:00 PM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate all of your wonderful comments my friend, Emile.

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