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The Atom Bomb

Making and use of the a-bomb An event that spewed waste A creation that leaves poison Man knew not the foretaste As always some good and some bad Today we have good use Nuclear medicine does good Bad if a bomb turned loose A man can not control himself Nor the acts of others Only if all men learn to love To love man as brothers The atomic bomb changed history The course of the war turned So now we live in a safe world If only love men yearned Sponsor: Craig Cornish Contest: Historical Modified Quatrain Written this seventh day of January twenty thirteen Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/19/2013 5:41:00 AM

You are way too modest Sara; I really Think your poetry, is always worth time reading, each of us a part of Gods world, One only knows it all.." we can just write to the best of our desire's and for the right motives; and this you do ( its enough for me ) hope you hit a high spot in Craigs contest..!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 4:52:00 PM

that's a great topic you chose to write on, Sara. Good luck in the contest!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/18/2013 3:20:00 PM

Outstanding poem Sara. Craig will love this Quatrain. You should be very proud of your penned words. One of the best poems I've read in a while. It sounds like a win to me. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

Kash Poet

Date: 1/18/2013 9:09:00 AM

A great poem on atom bomb.Enjoyed thye read Sara.Best wishes to you.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/17/2013 6:47:00 PM

This is an awesome entry into Craig's contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this truthful and significant poem this evening! What a dynamic piece, surely a wondrous poem, Great Work!!