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He was an atheist. He was proud of it. Those who believed in the existence of a Supreme being, and in the survival of the soul after death, Were, for him, dim-witted people worthy only to be The laughing stock of his "superior intelligence." He never concealed his denial of God, He did not need to believe in such a divine being Because He knew that himself was the superior being, and As far as the idea of a soul was concerned, there was none. One dies and that's it! Game over! The time passed and as he was mortal he died one day, However As soon he was declared dead, Surprised the atheist was to ''see himself " hovering All over his inanimate body. He had no arms, no legs, no head, or any other organs Just pure consciousness he was, pure thought, and Pure light. A sphere of a whitish color " He " was With some sparkling particles distributed around its periphery. In other words, he was a soul. Confused and bewildered with the situation that the atheist, Himself has now found, Did not know what to do and what to him was coming. In a little while though, A luminous being approached him, Wearing the broadest of possible smiles. The being was emanating love, compassion, warmth, and Understanding. As the entity came closer to the "atheist" with his mind these Words to him transmitted: " Do not be surprised, my dear friend, for I am here to welcome you and lead you to your creator whose existence you have throughout life, so vehemently, denied!"* © Demetrios Trifiatis 09 June 2021 * This story is inspired by a debate that I once had with the head of the Computer Department of a renowned university, who was an atheist and who called me silly to believe in God and in the afterlife. When I asked him: " Why I am silly?" He replied that I was silly because I believed in these theories and went on to tell me that I will be surprised when I die because I will find nothing of what I expect to find. At that moment I retorted: " My dear friend, Nigel, it will not be me that would be surprised but you, because if your theory is correct, I will not be there to be surprised but if my theory is correct then you will be the one to be surprised." He looked at me for a few seconds and then he said: If you put it like that, Demetrios, you are right. I will be the one to be surprised."

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Date: 6/10/2021 3:52:00 AM
Yes. Atheists will definitely be surprised... not so sure with heaven as not all roads lead to heaven... only Jesus leads there. God bless you sweet friend, Love, Gina
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Date: 6/10/2021 11:54:00 AM
I am talking about the atheist's surprise, my dearest friend, Gina. Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, hugs xxx
Date: 6/9/2021 2:34:00 PM
Fantastic story. Demetrios, dearest friend, that led to a great thought provoking and insightful poem, whatever the subject is, your great faith is so important to try to talk with talent and diplomacy. Blessings and best regards
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Date: 6/10/2021 11:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind visit and lovely comment, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings.
Date: 6/9/2021 9:15:00 AM
Most interesting poem and the background story is so important to understanding it. Good writing throughout, Demetrios. I certainly enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/9/2021 10:40:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, my dearest friend, L MILTON. Blessings.
Date: 6/9/2021 9:04:00 AM
Interesting story Demetrios. It led to a great poem you have passed on to others :) Have a nice day!
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Date: 6/9/2021 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment dearest, Heidi. I sent you a new Soup Mail with details. Hope it would help. Hugs xxx
Date: 6/9/2021 4:37:00 AM
Intriguing story my friend. Your faith based dialogue is always illuminating. Many thanks for your thoughts, Demetrios.
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Date: 6/9/2021 6:41:00 AM
I greatly appreciate your gracious visit and comment, my dearest friend, Vijay. Stay healthy. Blessings.
Date: 6/9/2021 1:40:00 AM
WoW! Demetrios, You penned such a thought-provoking write. In my opinion, nature alone proves there is a creator. I believe many will be surprised. Well done Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Date: 6/9/2021 3:41:00 AM
Yes, nature is proof! However, those who believe have no need for proof, and those who do not believe, no proof is sufficient, my dearest friend, Alexis. Thank you very much for your lovely visit and comment! Blessings and hugs xxx
Date: 6/9/2021 1:22:00 AM
Thought provoking verse Demetrios, I think many will be surprised, for them I hope its not too late. Tom
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Date: 6/9/2021 3:37:00 AM
Yes, all of them will be surprised, my dearest friend, Tom. God in His infinite mercy will welcome them! Thank you for your precious visit and comment. Blessings.

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