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The Astronaut's Report

This lovely planet's quite unique - the strangest world I've ever seen: the sky, the clouds, the sun and moon, the sea, the sand and ice are green; in shades of green, the people too, the dogs and cats, the birds and fish, the dinosaurs and unicorns. I see more green than one could wish to ever see - but then, I blink and all has changed to shades of...pink... written 15th March for Carolyn's Green contest

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Date: 3/24/2019 7:46:00 PM
ha ha ha I love your witty twist on the green theme Jack:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/24/2019 7:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "Green" Humor Contest, Jack :) - greeting from // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2019 6:45:00 AM
I almost knew that a win was certainly due for this poem , congratulations Jack Poetry hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 3/23/2019 8:19:00 PM
Would like to see this green world of dinosaurs and unicorns, among others, or is it pink? Fun poem, Jack. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries, so you should be proud of your achievement. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2019 4:20:00 PM
I truly enjoyed your 'original' take on the green theme, Jack...in fact I read this delightful poem a couple of times. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/16/2019 3:04:00 PM
Hi Jack, Like your poem very much indeed - good luck in the contest! Poetry hugs, Jenny
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Date: 3/15/2019 7:00:00 PM
haha, as only could be described by an astronaut!!! (or someone with a very weird color blindness)
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Date: 3/15/2019 9:42:00 AM
A delightful poem, Jack. Well penned.
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