The Astronaut - Anacreontic Verse

An alien lost,
upon a planet
in distant space,
while hunkered down
within a cave,
tightly encased
by coriaceous
materials
splashed with wear
and cross-stitched red,
feels the presence
of five damp probes,
slick and chalky,
fragranced in musk
and saltwater,
slowly closing
around his body
applying pressure
direct to the seams
of his airtight suit.
At Minute Maid Park,
in Houston, Texas,
Dallas Keuchel
reaches into
his fielder’s glove
and prepares to pitch
a baseball.


8/15/2016
Submitted for: Anacreontic Verse 4
Sponsored by:  Edward Ebbs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 9:21 PM
how on earth did I miss this one too! I am so mad at myself right now! I love this :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 7:26 AM
What incredibly imagery Phillip - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
DiMino Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 9:49 PM
:) Love it!
Garcia Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Thanks Joe. Not quite as deep as yours but it was a fun write.
Bohto Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Vast space inside a small space. Love it.
Garcia Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 8:25 AM
It gave me a vast ache inside the empty space where my brain should be to write! So I'm pleased you enjoyed. Thank you!
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