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The Ashes the Rain and Other Things

somehow the timing was off moving in winds flowing in opposite direction pools of rain to end the parade weeping at the thought and the other things not thought of fate to the wind ashes floating on water tormented even still hating movies in black and white color like kansas wizards and demons lost in the eyes gaze the mirror always wins to infinite reflection for the rain the ashes and other things =z=

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Date: 1/5/2018 11:47:00 PM
Nice poem - No I had not heard of Townes Van Zandt the last name is spelled like my cousins I can see if he has. I posted some different material under stories etc... per your request. Sorry but I am not sure how to respond to comments yet.
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Shaun Hull
Date: 1/6/2018 6:49:00 AM
thanks sheila..not a big deal..i just thought you might enjoy some of his music like to live is to fly..allmusic.com has not only him but tons of musicians with great bio's on all of them..you might check it out when you get a chance..c ya..! https://www.allmusic.com/album/townes-van-zandt-mw0000200802

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