Mona Ebel Poet Rhyme

The Ascent

I saw a Mountain from afar
I wished upon a shooting star
I knew I never climbed this Mount
My steepest climb was Fear and Doubt.

I never made this climb before 
But knew this was the Way to more
I looked up at the stars and sighed
Would my dreams be realized?

A Day to come when I would know
Face to Face a dream no more.
A Mountain of Promise awaited me
I urgently prepared to leave.

I headed to that distant place
The Hope of Love upon my face
A journey I must take alone
Until His heart becomes my home.

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Danka Sikorska October 3, 2023 at 1:31 AM I do not usually like rhymes, but your poem is neat and pleasant to read! :) Mona Ebel October 15, 2023 at 8:06 AM Thank you, Danka. I appreciate that you found something noteworthy in my poem. You are an incredible poet in my opinion. I hope to hear from you again.

Sotto Poet September 29, 2023 at 6:10 PM Mona, your thoughts are absolutely exquisite. Allow your imagination to soar freely. Your poetry surpasses all expectations. The imagery you create is flawless, and your words have the power to transport us into a magnificent poem. Thanks for your comment on my page. Let's keep interacting. Mona Ebel October 15, 2023 at 8:08 AM Thank you, Sotto! I wrote that back in 2016. The words came from a download, and required no thinking really on my part. It was given to my spirit as a gift. Because of this, it is a poem I feel I cannot take credit for, and it is the one that is closest to my heart.