The Ascent

I saw a Mountain from afar I wished upon a shooting star I knew I never climbed this Mount My steepest climb was Fear and Doubt. I never made this climb before But knew this was the Way to more I looked up at the stars and sighed Would my dreams be realized? A Day to come when I would know Face to Face a dream no more. A Mountain of Promise awaited me I urgently prepared to leave. I headed to that distant place The Hope of Love upon my face A journey I must take alone Until His heart becomes my home.

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Danka Sikorska

Date: 10/3/2023 1:31:00 AM

I do not usually like rhymes, but your poem is neat and pleasant to read! :)

Mona Ebel
Date: 10/15/2023 8:06:00 AM

Thank you, Danka. I appreciate that you found something noteworthy in my poem. You are an incredible poet in my opinion. I hope to hear from you again.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2023 6:10:00 PM

Mona, your thoughts are absolutely exquisite. Allow your imagination to soar freely. Your poetry surpasses all expectations. The imagery you create is flawless, and your words have the power to transport us into a magnificent poem. Thanks for your comment on my page. Let's keep interacting.

Mona Ebel
Date: 10/15/2023 8:08:00 AM

Thank you, Sotto! I wrote that back in 2016. The words came from a download, and required no thinking really on my part. It was given to my spirit as a gift. Because of this, it is a poem I feel I cannot take credit for, and it is the one that is closest to my heart.