The Art of Darkness

When you offer up your heart and soul
and pour yourself into a relationship
only to have it spat back into your face
and your heart ripped out and trampled under foot
right before your own eyes

and when you attempt any kind of damage limitation
to be laughed at almost hysterically
leaving you to hide in a dark corner
with the tears streaming down your face
feeling every raw nerve being scraped again and again

and yet you go on hoping for better
optimistically hoping for sunrise
when in reality there is only the night and darkness
the darkness of her nasty mouth and wicked laugh

in it all there is one glimmer of light,
the children you made are beautiful and bright
and young as they are they can see the truth

as you retreat further you feel it stir
deep inside it fights back
your spirit, that wonderful human thing
it’ still there unbroken, just a little bent

so you escape into your art
and pour into it your heart
but art has a dark side too
and it can bite you opening up the wounds
making you raw once again

facing the darkness from within your light
and so yet again you retreat into the night

...............deeper and DEEPER into Darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 2:59 PM
love isn't a game for the faint at heart! Hope you feel better! Light & Love
Lee Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 4:55 PM
to Linda-Marie and Carol thank you so much for the wonderful welcome Love 'N' Laughter CLiPiCs
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January 19, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing...check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..
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January 19, 2011 at 3:39 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup . Wishing you the best in your writing endeKrissavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
Lee Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:47 PM
SK you are so cool thank you for pointing me in the right direction Love 'N' Laughter CLiPiCs
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January 18, 2011 at 7:42 PM
Wow! Kriss, i must say i know the feeling.. when its slaped back at us.. but, now! I have to have pride, and call what i thought was love, confusion... lol... never again.. enjoyed your deep dark write..i think.. it was the light that got me down,..p.d.
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January 18, 2011 at 7:38 PM
yeah, i am your first commenter! p.d.
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